alex petry

Please list 10 ways you can improve your essay scores

1. better quotes                      6. staying on topic
2 better explanation                       7 better word choic
3.  better planing                      8. better sentence format
4. re reading the book                        9. longer paragraphs
5.  reading the book                       10. thinking throught it

Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5.  For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).

1. it was all over the place throurout the entir book

2. time is not linear when billy was with the tralfamabors

3. death is not a big deal the book

4. war is bad

5. humans have a vary simpel mind

6. the book was vary scatterd

7. the 4th dimetion is a new concept

8.the tralfamadorins are wise

9. the book was vary intresting

1o. death is not the end

11.i thought that the book was odd

12.the tralfamadoians should not look down on us

13. the tralfams have no religion

14. it made me think about life

15. it made me think about time


State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1. humans are simpal

2. life is just a string of events 

3. death is not a big deal

4. life has no definit ending

5. time is an ilution


Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences.  You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit.  This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
EXAMPLE:
Billy: Hello, Mr. Cheng
Mr. Cheng: Hi Billy
Billy: Have you heard about Tralfamadore?
Mr. Cheng: No, what’s that?


a. hi billy
b. hello alex
a. what was it like on the aliean planet
b. i learnd alot about time and how things work like that time is an ilution created by the inability for the humen eye to see the forth dimetion
a. that is alot to think about what did u learn during the war.
b. after i was on tralfamador i didnt care that people where dying becuse they would be alive in another time
aok that givs me alot to think about good bye